Turntable Jack

I enjoyed it :P I am a bit tired so I may not give the best advice and will look over this in the morning for a second read. I ...

Haha, i thought it was a really short poem I was about to review. I came up with the suggestion to remove " and so unnecessary" to make cruel and ...

It is much better than you think. For some reason or another it flows pretty well and is a bit catchy. Who am I? This is the question I am ...

You are danger you break everything in sight. This is a great opening line to start a poem and I really like it. However, you are missing something in between ...

Just to point one thing out, you need too reviews before posting work. Alright, now or a quick few suggestions. 1) I understand you are going for a bold statement, ...

Grammar Fixes and Such Your skin is soft supple and y outhful . Y ou must have been sent upon wings of a dove ; For you resemble Aphrodite the ...

Bravo. :D Now that was a great poem that flowed extremely well and I really enjoyed it. I truly liked that a lot. I don't really have any things for ...

I like this better than your other poem to be honest. It makes much more sense and is better written. The first line is great and is a wonderful line ...

First off, let me say that I can tell you are creative and a good writer from reading that. However, I don't think that poem worked for you and came ...

Your message is great, and their is no denying that. Good job on writing a meaningful message. As for your poem, it is good for what it is. It is ...

I like it and it flows quite nice. I like the shortness and it is creative. However, the line Inspiration is gone. seems a bit too long syllable rise and ...